Looking for feedback on my poem 8th&nbsp;Graders are a collection of&nbsp;differences.&nbsp;&nbsp;Some are as prickly as the spikes on a cactus,&nbsp;Others are sweet like&nbsp;marshmallows&nbsp;Some are sensitive like&nbsp;the petals of a&nbsp;flower,&nbsp;Others are rough like&nbsp;rocks&nbsp;&nbsp;Some are artsy&nbsp;Some are sporty&nbsp;Some are spontaneous&nbsp;Some are calculated&nbsp;&nbsp;We want to be doctors&nbsp;We want to be lawyers&nbsp;We want to be singers&nbsp;We want to be engineers&nbsp;&nbsp;But while we’re as&nbsp;contrasting&nbsp;As the stars against the midnight sky,&nbsp;We all strive for a better world,&nbsp;To make a difference that’s everlasting&nbsp;&nbsp;8th&nbsp;Graders are a collection of differences...&nbsp;Except for one thing,&nbsp;We’re the leaders of a new world&nbsp;One built on better principles&nbsp;&nbsp;

Looking for feedback on my poem8th Graders are a collection of differences.  Some are as prickly as the spikes on a cactus, Others are sweet like marshmallows Some are sensitive like the petals of a flower, Others are rough like rocks  Some are artsy Some are sporty Some are spontaneous Some are calculated  We want to be doctors We want to be lawyers We want to be singers We want to be engineers  But while we’re as contrasting As the stars against the midnight sky, We all strive for a better world, To make a difference that’s everlasting  8th Graders are a collection of differences... Except for one thing, We’re the leaders of a new world One built on better principles  

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8th Graders