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Hi, just want feedback, would I be a good author? :)

Next thing I know, I'm straddling him with the steering wheel digging into my lower back. Our lips are fused together, and though everything is rough and hurried I can't help but notice that his lips are the softest thing about him, at least thus far.


In an effort to take the wheel's pressure off my lower back, I scoot closer to Ricky, and the area of my body wrought with so much sensitivity is now pressed against a hard bulge beneath me. I gasp at the contact, and reflexively press harder, anything to heighten the sensation.



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Re: Hi, just want feedback, would I be a good author? :)

heyy.. yeahh I love the details like in the last where you've written about body pressing stuff.. just write these scenes steamy.. and yess you can be a great author. never stop believing in yourslef love <3